"A Knight In The Naga Kingdom"
and who liked it, that i have posted what i think is going to be the final version of the first chapter, might have some mistakes here and there but im not going to worry too much about it, if i find out about them i will correct them.
any ways, you can read CH1 the final version here [link]
CH2 will show up some time later once i check it all out and every thing, make sure that i said what i wanted to say and every thing.
so please check it out, i love feedback.






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Trigon: Did Arella told you what happen to your father?
Raven: She told me enough. She told me you kill him.
Trigon: No, I am your father.
Raven: NO!!!
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i dont care what you make on here, i will comment on the skills used to make your work of art, not what it is.
then found your new profile.
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i dont care what you make on here, i will comment on the skills used to make your work of art, not what it is.
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i dont care what you make on here, i will comment on the skills used to make your work of art, not what it is.
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